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Her eyes so bright. So lively. So much meaning
behind them, from what I can see. Maybe it's just
me. But her eyes I can't resist looking into them.

They seem so deep, like an ocean. Those deep
green blue eyes with a black ring around them.
So beautiful, sometimes I find it hard to pull away
from looking into your eyes.

Your smile, so sweet. Your voice, just as wonderful.
I love hearing your voice everyday. I love seeing you.
The way you hug me makes me feel better even when
I don't know I'm sad. You always know what to say.

The way you talk to me. With a wide vocabulary, you make
feel like a higher ranked person. You make me sound like
I'm a super hero, I'm a "selfless saviour." You make me
feel like I can accomplish anything with encouraging
words with that smile of your. With those deep eyes.
With your hugs. I love everything you've ever done for
me.

I appriciate every encouraging word you've said to
me to make me think twice. I appriciate every hug,
every smile, I appriciate everything. They way
you are is how I'd wish you'd stay forever. Just
being you, and no one else. Sticking up to the
preps. Doing what you think is right. Something
about you, something about your smile, about your
laugh, about your hugs and something about your
eyes. Makes me feel better, makes me feel appriciated.

More then I am if I am at all. It may sound stupid
but everything you do draws my attention to you.
The way you look when your angry, the way you smile.
The way you look into my eyes, the way you laugh.
The way you say encouaging words and the way
you hug me.  

But not matter how hard I try I'll never get your
attention how he has yours. I'll never be the one
you love. I'll never be the one to hold you. Never
the one to let you cry on my sholder. Because you've
got him. You've got me wound tight. But you'll never
feel for me the way I feel for you. True theres really no
such thing as forever.

But like you told me once but in my own terms, I can't promise
a year from now, I can't promise 3 months from now. But I can
promise right now, I can promise you days weeks. But never forever.
If forever existied and I could love for so long. I would.

Your eyes talk, your eyes so deep, so much depth in
them. They seem like they go on for a life time. That
beautiful hair soft and colorerful in it's own way.
Your smile like no others, your hugs deffenatly unique.
Your laugh, such a wonderful sound that rings in my head.
Your voice, will never leave my mind. I can still hear it.

Your eyes talk, your eyes so deep. Could you ever
really see me? Why care so much, for someone that's
really done nothing for this world in reality. In your
world I'm this person who saves the day. But do I really?
Or am I just there, just another person in the crowd watching.
All I do is take whatever you throw at me and pick up whatever
I find left of that person. That's not much of a hero.

Her eyes speak so loudly to me. Her smile makes me smile.
Her laugh a wonderful laugh. Her voice a beautiful sound, one
I've never heard. One I can't seem to get out of my mind.
Her eyes such cool green blue pools. Like the ocean. Her eyes
so deep and will always be.
:iconxdeidaratobix:

Author's Comments

Eh...I could help myself. I had to write about her. Not my fault. Also if it's long I didn't intend for it to be. So if you don't wanna read it just don't waste your time then. I don't think this was a waste of time. I tryied to put as much feeling as I could into it. But it wasn't really working..because i'm kinda feeling down. So it maybe not be my best work, sorry.

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:iconrunningbear5858:
I quite like this, it's very honest and you describe things beautifully.

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Wish, Want, Hope, Dream.

I am a poetry administrator for =DailyLitDeviations
:iconjewelgem123:
Meds = Constant Eye Dilation

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... touche.

Cheesecake: [link]
:iconninjapuffin:
Its not my meds...they're dilated even when I'm off them...I just have large pupils...

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For realsies, babe.
:iconjewelgem123:
Oh.
Abby = Dilated Eyes in General

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... touche.

Cheesecake: [link]
:iconxdeidaratobix:
Oh thanks. :)

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They say you can find a hero in everyone.
But it's not true, you're lucky if you find one.
But I was more then lucky, I found my heros.
My friends who stuck by me, through thick and
thin. They all cluster together to make a family.
My family.
:iconamoralbutterfly:
but grief oftentimes produces beautiful work
:iconxdeidaratobix:
:) Yes I suppose your right.

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They say you can find a hero in everyone.
But it's not true, you're lucky if you find one.
But I was more then lucky, I found my heros.
My friends who stuck by me, through thick and
thin. They all cluster together to make a family.
My family.

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